This is great haha, I liked a lot of things about this one.

• Quest indicators
• Limited map movement so I don't waste time doing needless exploring
• Really like how Harold starts off as a bumbling fool
• Despite the Jam quality, you got a good atmosphere and mood going
• Enjoyed the writing, for the most part wholesome and to the point
• Lol'ed at Harold being caught in a net
• Funny ending sequence

The only thing I would've preferred is faster combat, sometimes felt slightly grindy. This isn't uncommon in a jam game, but I only bring it up on this one because I enjoyed playing and wanted to progress the story without several+ turn combat.

This is a good example of a story-driven game/visual novel/interactive fiction that is not boring. The pacing is solid, there's lots of variety, and although everything is pretty "on rails," there's just that bit of challenge that keeps things interesting. Animations and other visual effects were used effectively, including in the battles. I couldn't even find any spelling or grammar errors. Well done!

A nice touching story on how Harold became a real hero! Good job!

Not a bad little game!! The battles were very well balanced. The story was slow at first but got really good. Great Job

Nice looking maps, and great work with all of the sprite pathing throughout. 

The battles were fun, but very easy. 

The cheese was a nice touch, and the ending sequence was wild. 

I will admit that it often felt like the game was playing me, but the pathing was so good I was happy to be along for the ride.

I did like it, the ending was kind of unexpected but it all connects with the cheese lol, nice work

(Let me steal the format for reviewing the game!)

Spirit and essence of Harold:  It writes well on making Harold from a fake hero to true hero.

Fun:  The mechanics are mostly puzzles and battle system. The gameplay is okay , the story is a lot funnier to me. For the battle part, I think the balancing is done just right that I almost die there but survived!
Creativity: Good variety of mini games and scenes.
General Comments:  My suggestion is make the pacing of the story faster. I think it has taken too much time on making Harold being stupid. And 1-2 examples would be enough , unless there are important personalities or descriptions to add to Harold.