The first area looks really nice, I didn't make it past the second area after getting desynchronized so I'm not sure how far the game goes or how the rest looks, but the beginning was quite strong! The camera following the player's y-axis makes the game very hard to play as you become blind to the death pits once you jump, that should help the platforming feel a bit nicer, also I'm not sure if its intentional but you cant jump whilst standing on a metal box. Your unique take on the theme is very interesting, it would be cool to see you take this idea further!

The player being so close to the bottom of the screen made it hard to see what was up ahead. And I couldn't jump when stood on some of the metal boxes for some reason? But it was a good concept, the art was charming, and the music was very chill :3 

I really liked the music and art ! - but the game itself seemed unfinished and the controls were not very satisfying to use.