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A jam submission

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You find yourself on a moving train.
Submitted by Jeppe Friis (@JeppeOFriis)
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CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Design#1623.7783.778

Ranked from 9 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

That was great! The dream-like story is very nice to follow, and I like how the colors and sounds are used. Without picture, it makes this world vivid. It reminded me a bit of Kentucky Route Zero in its atmosphere. Well done!

Submitted

That was really interesting! I do wish the sentences were more varied though: a lot of them were structured the same way. Also, I tend to forget where I am. Also, I found that really bright color change was a little jarring on my eyes. All in all I think it was a good effort, and should definitely be finished :)

(+1)

Wow, I really liked the concept and the story got me really interested! Are you planning on expanding on the game at some point? 

Developer

I am so excited that you enjoyed it. I wasn't really planning on expanding on it, but I will think about it :) 

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

You know, I love these kinds of games. You are right, we chose a very similar route to take on this game-jam adventure, but I think it ultimately lead to two different games. I loved this game. I understand it's not for everyone, but for people who got a rich imagination, this is perfect. I could see the golden-lit mountains perfectly in my head. I loved the feeling of being on a lonely train ride out in the middle of nowhere. Although sometimes it was a bit hard to remember where I could move, I still 'finished' the experience. You should really elaborate on this concept, it could be a really, really cool genre I think! Sound really adds another experience to text, plus you used the background colors very thoughtfully and it worked very well! Good job on making this dude :)

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much for the feedback!

You just made my day. I will think about how I could expand on it.

Submitted

No worries man! Just promise to keep making games ;)

Submitted(+1)

Nice idea and execution. The colours and sounds worked well!

Developer

Thank you so much for playing my game. You are the first person to ever play a game I have made. Thank you 

Submitted

No worries. Was better than my game! Good luck!

Hope others play it as well.