I think you set a really nice atmosphere for the game and you got an awesome environment, loving the bumpiness of the skin and all of the details in the microscopic world. The music and sound effects especially the timing of the walking are all great. My only suggestion for future improvement is I think the hairs might work better as a solid
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| How unique is the location? | #38 | 3.755 | 4.056 |
| Should this entry qualify for the next round? | #64 | 3.189 | 3.444 |
| How good is the art style? | #66 | 3.086 | 3.333 |
| Would you want to see more levels of this game? | #67 | 2.880 | 3.111 |
| Is this a well thought out level? | #78 | 2.366 | 2.556 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Which game engine did you use?
Unity
Comments
Very unique location! Arrow keys worked fine, but while trying to move with WASD, I couldn't move left or forward with the W and A keys. The art style is interesting and the music enjoyable. Nice work!
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GDKO 2023 Round 1 "Astral Plane"Very unique location, the art is uncanny and reminds me of Subnautica. The character move set with the dash and floaty jump suit this game very well. Unrelated to this round, but I encountered many bugs (other than lice) that made it hard to play, I hope you will have time to fix them in future rounds and I look forward to the gameplay
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UyuniInteresting spooky level for sure, curious to see what comes. Being the manifestation of head-lice is definitely unique!
Also this reminds me I should be more inclusive of other keyboard layouts like your azerty layout in my own gamejam entries, I appreciate you having the arrow keys! (F didn’t work to bring up controls though)
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Escherport ConceptI really love the particle effects coming out of the player, and the atmosphere of the game is great! I hope you get through to the next round because I'd love to see what the story would be like. Just saw your comment saying it was located in the human skin, that's such a unique location, probably one of the most unique ones I've seen!
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trAPPed - GDKO 2023 Rounds 1/2Great to play with you on stream watching. Love the world you built here. I see nothing but potential and want to spend more time in this space. Great work.
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Intergalactic JanitoryLove the style you went for the human skin! Nice little details with the hair, and the skin with the unsettling music and SFX!
I was so happy to find the little mites walking around hehe. I always wanted to make a game on the skin, it is such a weird world!
Interesting choice of camera work, to have it move around constantly! (Are you using a French keyboard? The arrow keys worked nicely but not the WASD hehe)
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ScrapyardI'm curious where is this location?? Where did you get the idea? And curious what kind of story you will give this level?
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Scrap Planet
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