Nice game, storyline, tutorial and all..
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Ghost's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Theme | #51 | 3.250 | 3.250 |
Innovation | #109 | 2.500 | 2.500 |
Gameplay | #113 | 2.625 | 2.625 |
Overall | #121 | 2.500 | 2.500 |
Audio | #142 | 1.938 | 1.938 |
Graphics | #161 | 2.188 | 2.188 |
Ranked from 16 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
Really well done, especially considering having used html for only a month. The game has a tutorial (instructions on how to play,) a story, a character with feelings, increasing difficulty and maybe alternative endings based on the game-over screen
Some few minor improvement points
- Use a more subtle sound for the ticking clock in-game. The current one is loud and harsh (I thought a huge monster was approaching me)
- some spooky background music would be nice.
Very nice! The audio is super simple but really effective. Great job for your first jam!
I like the idea of having the character slowing down at each round. Nicely done.
Cool game! Quite simple but I enjoyed the dialogue and playing for all the different endings. Game development has a rather steep learning curve, especially if you’re still new to coding. Props to you for not only completing your first game, but also submitting it to a jam for others to review and critique!
This is really good for your first Jam. I found it really fun to try and guess where I needed to be.
Great work!
very cool to have manage to give a message we so few text.
(but i did not manage to go after ending 1/6, so i guess i miss 6/6)
At first I died fast cause I thought I had to avoid the clocks. I did make it to ending 1/6 though I moved so slowwwwww heheh... cool concept, but maybe explain that you want to catch the clocks at the beginning of the game?
Otherwise I dig it. Nice job!
Super nice game with an original and interesting concept at the same time, the appearance of the game is quite basic, but with this type of game it is not a big problem.
Very cool that you can get 6 different endings, even if I managed to get only one. The endgame UI was magnificently beautiful.
P.S.: I noticed that no matter how hard you try, you will always only get "00:10", I noticed this when I repeatedly restarted the game's web page hoping to get a better time.
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