I like the concept of this a lot, and the bits that I did get working were fun, but I couldn’t figure out how to play really. I’m not sure how much was me not understanding vs how much was actually bugged. I still liked it tho! 

Awesome concept and good dialogue, but the tutorial is just a somewhat complicated explanation of the mechanics with no demonstration/action on the player's part. The END command also doesn't work, unfortunately breaking the rest of the game. The dialogue really was good, though, and this has all the makings of an excellent game if it worked properly: decent music, a complex battle system, and noticeable effort.