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A jam entry

Pretty PleaseView game page »

Make me pretty please
Submitted by Stanza Creative Studio with 5 hours, 20 minutes before the deadline

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw score
Graphics/Visuals - المرئيات/الجرافيكس#213.2003.200
Sound - الصوتيات#272.6672.667
Overall#272.6442.644
Overall - التقييم عام#312.6002.600
Fun Factor - عامل التسلية#322.4672.467
Innovation - الابداع#372.5332.533
Theme - استخدام موضوع الزنقة#382.4002.400

Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Game Engine Name اسم المحرك:
Ren'Py visual novel engine

Team Name, if you have any اسم الفريق ان وجدت
Stanza Creative Studio

Who worked on this game? (Name List) اسماء الذين عملوا على صناعة اللعبة
Reem, MansouRJ, G

Country? الدولة؟
Saudi Arabia

If you used any Game Assets not done by your team, Must be Listed here :
Amacha Music

How to contact you? An E-mail preferred اذكر وسيلة تواصل؟ يفضل بريد الكتروني
http://stanza.fatafeet.net

Comments

Layla Albabtain · 87 days ago

I loved it. =)
it is well written =)

nice game, good job

I never expected to see a visual novel game in GameZanga, The story is very interesting!

My suggestions to improve the game:

1- Add more visuals and expression images.

2- Need better presentation (Title screen etc)

3-Better to restrict player response to the options provided.

4- Ending can be improved (image or video scene)


Overall, I'm happy to see different genres games for GameZanga, Well done guys.

Thank you for your excellent feedback, friends!

The zanga theme becomes obvious once you've reached the third (true) ending, but unfortunately that is not possible with this current build ><

The inability to get the other endings is a known issue. At the time of submission it worked for the code developer, but we realized there have been a coding mistake and only found out how to fix it AFTER the jam ended.

it's not nice to edit the game now (as per the rules) so please check back after the voting period is over.

We will update the game with a working script in about 6 days ^_^

For now, we will be judged and rated on the work we submitted, just like everybody else XD and that's fine. it was a fun first zanga and we learned a lot!

We appreciate the feedback and thank you for playing!

Dexecon · 92 days ago

I haven't been able to get any endings other than the mildly disappointed one. Am i wrong in thinking there's only one ending, and that's kind of the point? A metaphor for actual plastic surgery?

it was a nice game, but not quite within the theme of the event.

i like visual novels that are not a dating sim, it was fun to play and a nice well taught lesson. although i would have liked it if there were more "choices" for the player, what i mean by that is, you kinda pushed the player into these decisions, the player had no connection with he main character, nor the feel to be forced to make one of these sacrafices, therefor, 99% of people would have, disliked your choice right there and then.

technical issue: i got the ending of "mildly disappointed" and the ending image, just didtn show up, it said (image not found or something similar)

but yeah, it was good game i'd totally love to see more good visual novels :) .

as i said i loved the game, i'd love to see more visual novels from you. keep up the good work mate. and remember take your time thinking plot and story. and add whatever necessary and dont cut too much .


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