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Mydlarz: Dawn of The GriphonView game page »

Submitted by MiszczTheMaste with 23 hours, 19 minutes before the deadline
Rated by 10 people so far
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Not bad at all. I've got a few things if you don't mind:

  • The music in the menu is quite a good fit for in-game as well.
  • If you plan on continuing this, I'd recommend also putting some sfx in key scenes. I always wanted to see that in a text-based game.
  • I wish there is an option to toggle on/off the typewriter style of displaying text. It was a bit annoying to me. I wanted to concentrate on the story and I had to keep pressing ESC for every new line.

I like the texts 'CRT' look, adds atmosphere.  There are some grammatical errors, and each sentence starts a new paragraph?  I can read quicker than it auto types, faster pace would be better.  Some ambient music might be nice too?

I like the dark atmosphere of the game. Good story!