This feels close to perfect in terms of both presentation and substance. I like the inclusion of real-world information on kowloon walled city and now have a wikipedia page open to learn more, and the mission feels like it progresses at a good speed.

The only con I would mention is that pamphlets are a bit awkward to use as PDFs because you lose track of the page order so easily, so offering an alternate download presenting the information from left to right or with page numbers would be appreciated.

Pros :

- Trifold pamphlet scenario. I'm loving these, it's a brilliant mechanism for making authors cut the fat out of a scenario and ensure all the information is immediately accessible to the Ref in play.

- I learned about a new, fascinating superstructure that existed in our reality.

Cons :

- Not many. The superstructure is intrinsically labyrinthian to outsiders, but FIST's goal requires hitting specific parts in a specific order which seems like it might be cumbersome. (I haven't played it, so I might be way off.)  

- TERMITE has the word Time too many times - "3 times" would be better as "thrice".  SUNFLOWER is missing the word "for" at one point. 

- Look, I'm trying real hard to offer criticism here, it's a fantastic looking trifold, get it if you haven't yet.