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When The Lake Shines Its Reflected On Her Eye's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Artwork/Music | #3 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
| Choice Impact | #4 | 1.000 | 1.000 |
| Storyline | #4 | 2.500 | 2.500 |
| Puzzles/Logic | #4 | 1.000 | 1.000 |
Ranked from 2 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Hello and welcome to Feedback Quest - Visual Novels! This is Hythrain, reporting live with my feedback!
The visuals for this piece messed with me a bit, which I enjoyed. They felt disturbing yet welcoming. I do want to see more.
Beyond that, however, it's obviously very short, doesn't have any real choice impact nor any puzzles or logic to work through. It also lacks for music, which I hope a longer version will correct. The story going on is enough to get on the board, but it for sure needs more. I hope you plan on doing more with this.
Thank you for playing the game!
Yea this was more like a little test experience rather than a full game, I do plan to make another VN with a similar art style in the medium term, being a LOT longer and having choices and maybe some small logic puzzles, so it's nice to see you liked the visuals and writing!
An interesting experimental piece. The artwork is special, but so far it's more an illustrated short poem with a rather abrupt ending than a full-fledged visual novel.
Maybe there's more to come...?
I do plan of doing a longer VN with a similar concept, so this is more like a small test experience