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A jam submission

A Very Dangerous CriminalView game page

Submitted by kemlly161 — 3 hours, 23 minutes before the deadline
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CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Spooky Greatness#192.2672.267

Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Which category is your game in?

Le Grand Guignol (created in over 4 hrs)

Which theme does your game fall under?

Spooky

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Comments

Submitted (2 edits) (+1)

This is well written for the genre. (A bit gory for my personal taste in stories, but that's neither here nor there). I do agree with Nils, if you were going to work on this some more, I think it might have more punch to it if it skips from the forest scene straight to where you're getting back into the car and talking to Johan and crew and realise what's going on.

Also, might be a good idea to give yourself a nickname instead of using your email so that the bots don't pick it up and start spamming you.

Developer

Thanks it's my first time doing Ectocomp a bit of learning curve. thanks for reading.

Submitted(+1)

A tad dark for my taste.

You should check the "enable scrollbars" option, otherwise the select nickname page can block progression.

I think maybe it might have been more powerful if it had ended a tad sooner, just when we realize Johan is a ghost. As it was the last part was a bit like beating a dead horse, though I suppose that would be par for the course for the protagonist. ;)

Developer (1 edit)

Thanks for reading, yes that would have made it a nice ending