- The concept here is really good, I love the idea of being aware of the bees.

Improvements

- The bees could be bigger, and move?

- Work on your design of the map, and maybe think about why players are doing what they're doing. Why are the bees there? What motivates the player?

- Maybe it's a huge swarm of bees and you really need to figure out the path through them, rather than just a couple