Cool, good story!

its certainly a unique idea but this felt more like reading a book than playing a game you could've let the player have options that would change the story in small ways 

Interesting  idea

You should at least attempt to create a game in the traditional sense as we are taking part in a game jam, even though the text quest itself might look, feel, and look amazing. Would you please rate my game and provide some feedback if you have the time? If not, at least assist a few of the individuals listed under "need for rating." It's all up to you, and keep up the wonderful work, developer.

Not really in the mood of reading but maybe some art would make me wanna read. Also you could have included it here on itch as a browser game. Better luck next time :)

That was a lot of reading.

The text quest itself may look and feel interesting and cool, but as we are participating in a game jam we should at least try to make a game in the usual meaning.

Also, good luck in the future!

Cool story but not really in the mood for a mini novel