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A jam submission

Luis - A game developer storyView game page

A little game inside an interactive story that tells about Luis, a game developer
Submitted by Fantantonio — 20 hours, 1 minute before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
VISUALS#192.1612.161
OVERALL#281.9681.968
INNOVATION#331.8391.839
SOUNDS AND MUSIC#361.8061.806
THEME#372.0322.032
THE EXPERIENCE#401.8391.839

Ranked from 31 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+1)

A cool little game that some devs can relate to! I like the narrative and some humor. Explosion sound jumpscared me xD The pendrive was too small, but I somehow managed to find it. Game could have more interactive things and music, especially at part where you have to catch drawings.
It could be more polished, but it is still a good game for a first jam :)

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

I love the art style.The narrative was interesting.The first stage was kinda difficult,but thanks to the Itch.io comments I got it.Maybe a short tutorial/one line of text would have been nice.Other than that the story is very unique and fun.

Love the optimism in the ending,I honestly didn't expect a happy ending xD

Developer

Thanks for the feedback :D
Anyway there are two endings ;)

Submitted(+1)

Oh wow.....The other ending is awesome.Thanks for pointing it out.Now I've fulfilled both my optimistic and pessimistic game dev lives 

ヽ(•‿•)ノ.

Submitted(+1)

That was a unique entry. I loved the art style. I liked the narrative.
As per previous comment I would definitely work on some level design choices to help  direct players to subconsciously know what to do 

Developer

Thanks for the feedback! It's my first game so I'll surely think about that in future projects :D

Submitted

how do I play? I got the opening cutscene then the green arrow disappeared after a set number of text prompts, so upon pressing the red X the text box closes and I can move my character, that's basically it. what do I do then?

Developer

You've to read the texts! The story guide you to find the solution!

I can't spoiler you all but you've to grab something clicking on it when you are near to it!

 Let me know if you can go on or if you are stack anyway ;)

Submitted

I read the text the thing is just really small and blends into the background. Got it now tho

Submitted(+1)

I enjoyed the game. It was a bit frustrating not knowing where to click... then I just approached it like on of the old point and click adventure games... scan the screen w/ the mouse looking for clues.  Great humor, I did actually laugh enough that my wife wanted to see what I was playing.

Developer (1 edit)

The parts of the game where there's something hidden can be frustrating but it's funny that it's all spoilered in the story dialogs :D
I appreciate the feedback and I'm so happy that in the end it makes you laugh!! :D

Submitted(+1)

I really liked your art style! This game was fun and the narrative funny! I also loved the two endings. I just had a jumpscare at the bomb sound, I had my headphones at the moment XD
Good job in finishing this game! ^^

Developer

Thanks for playing and completing the game 100% and for this great feedback!

It's my first game jam and it means a lot to me :) 

Submitted(+1)

Great complete storytelling game! Nice artwork and music. Played both ends unintentionally :). I really enjoyed it, altough the first two minutes were frustrating because I didn't know what to do so I clicked on everythink and nothing happend :D

Developer

ahah I can understand the frustration...I'm sorry about that, the only thing I can say is that the dialogs give the tips to go on in the story...but you already know that... :D

Thanks for the feedback and for playing my game! I'm happy that you enjoyed it :)

Submitted(+1)

Fun game with good puns!
The art style is really great too! 

Developer(+1)

Thanks so much!

I'm glad that you enjoyed the game :D

Submitted(+1)

Really fun game, I liked the art as well as the story. It made me laugh a couple times too :D

Developer

I'm so happy that made you laugh :D

Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate!!

Submitted(+1)

Hey!

I tried your game as well, like the art and story telling a lot!

I agree with henkehedstrom that the boom was a bit loud and that the part where I had to remember the name caught me off-guard.

Developer

Thanks for the feedback! It's my first game ever published so it means a lot to me have good tips ;)

Submitted(+1)

The art was really nice and the music aswell. The bomb sound was a bit too loud. I forgot the girls name first time I played so I had to restart, lol. I played both endings, there were only two, right? I liked that you first showed the story in black and white and then you played what you just saw. I would like to see  your art in upcoming games (and music if you did it). 

I rated it, hope you get the standing you want!

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the feedback :D  I appreciate it!!
At the end of the Jam I'll change the volume of the bomb sound.
Do you think it'd be a good idea to add a reset button when you've to write down the name? so it's not necessary to manually restart the game?

Anyway the endings are two ahaha so you've 100% completed the game!! <-- well done ;)

Submitted(+1)

No, I don't think it is necessary. But if the game had been longer you needed to remember a thing again I think that you should be able to reset that cutscene or get a hint or something. Yay 100%!

Developer

Yes you are right!! Thanks again for the tips ;)

Submitted(+1)

I had a good laugh while playing.  Good job!! Also the art was spot on, i'm impressed.

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you enjoyed the game, it means a lot to me :)