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A jam entry

The Death of Avery WrightView game page »

A tiny mystery visual novel.
Submitted by etoir (@_etoir_) with 4 hours, 38 minutes before the deadline

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw score
Professional Presentation#33.3333.333
Originality#43.3333.333
Complexity#52.3332.333
Overall Enjoyability#52.6672.667

Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

(+1)

It took a while to get the hang of the interface, BUT the entire style and atmosphere really drew me in! I thought the music was a great fit, and I found myself wanting to see all the endings. (I think one ending is broken though) Great work!

I was extremely confused clicking on invisible objects and empty tables/shelves. Is that a bug? I didn't figure out how to actually end the game and give my judgement.

Developer

Clicking on the shelves/tables is how you examine them. When you exhaust a character's dialogue you can chose to accuse them or not. The result of your decision there will determine what ending you get.

(+1)

While game style is interesting (i like sketchy stuff). But I'm totally agree with fightlessbird, the way game works might be improved by better indication of actions to make.