This review applies to the Android version ONLY!
...It's rather, in many ways, quite quaint for a VN; Language issues aside, most probably easily fixed with aid of a script editor, the only thing that really stopped me from giving a 5☆ rating was the lack of warning over the VN being completely silent—no background music, no sound effects, nothing—And that's the kind of thing you need to tell people. I mean, I get the game is free and thus a labour of love on the creator's part, but it should have been made known. Granted, adding a bgm and sound effects to this VN would easily take it to the next level.
Additionally, there's no hide button and the Android app does not have a unique app icon either, which I recommend addressing before releasing the next Android build.