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A jam submission

The Fading CityView game page

Short story about exploring a city shrouded in mist.
Submitted by Kanderwund (@kadw108) — 8 minutes, 31 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Quality of writing#14.4294.429
Narrative#14.1434.143
Overall#13.6293.629
Presentation#23.7143.714
Mechanics#52.5712.571
Theme incorporation#73.2863.286

Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Fantastic use of the images and superb. descriptive writing. I felt as if I was walking through the creepy streets myself, on edge at the subtle feeling of being watched... 

(+1)

I enjoyed the story writing and the art is adding a lot to the gloomy mood. 

Jam Host(+1)

Beautiful atmosphere and lore! Loved the dithered images of the strange ghost-town and the detailed descriptions of each part of the city. I think the experience would benefit a lot by including some abstract sound effects (wind, the bell, desolated city white noise e.t.c) but that's just my personal opinion. Overall I felt as if I was playing a character in a Whitewolf setting, great work!

Developer(+1)

Thank you! Would have added sound if I had the time, so perhaps after the jam is over? I didn't have World of Darkness or anything in mind when writing, but the aesthetic does fit!

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Amazing writing! So immersive. I felt very captivated. Loved the visuals too.

Developer(+1)

Thank you, glad you liked it!