It's a really cute game. there's some grammatical errors, and the fact it lands on a blank screen and then you have to click again is a little jarring, but the story and art are both wonderful. i really liked it. the only other problem is you've given us the actual version of the game. so anyone can look at the files, script, etc. and the game has also been playtested, so basically all text is already read, meaning you cant really skip. but it's really good for a first (?) visual novel made in one month. (and i'm pretty sure being eaten alive needs more warning than like chia talking about human spider babies once lmao)