This is one of my first encounters with Interactive Fiction; after a longstanding on-and-off want to learn Twine. I wanted to see examples of IF-games for myself and selected this  due to the potentially chilling premise. And despite its short length, I was floored by this. The writing is impeccable; with vivid words and detail that paint the chilling tone perfect. Accompanied with the bleak piano tune, it's paced in a way cutthroat as the speaker themselves, leaving me way more chilled than I thought I'd be going into it. :0c

Honestly, it's an insane display of talent to have me feeling all sorts of emotions while simultaneously making me question and wanting more from a game that genuinely didn't even take me more than five minutes to read through, if even that. Good job!!! I definitely can't wait to see more from you. :>