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Commentary on writing style

Dragongate visual novel
A downloadable visual novel for Windows, macOS, Linux, and Android

I've been told before I ever started Dragongate that my writing style  is childish.

Apparently not using many curse words makes everything I write a child's story regardless of how violent or dark it is, or even if it has sex scenes!

My opinion is that overuse of  "adult words" Makes the story trashy instead of mature.

Dragongate already has described gore, and future updates to the story will have some grim concepts.

Anyway, the next version is in progress and I'm hoping to upload it by the end of the month or the beginning of the next month.

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