Hello, I announce also here the closing of the sh**ty first draft of one of my science fiction stories. I am not sure if anyone on this platform cares, and in fact this is the first time I have shared anything here.

The plot refers to a gang of galactic thugs who find themselves abandoned by the criminal organisation of which they are part. They will have to get out and find out who their loved ones really are. The protagonist is a sentient virus but we also have an AI, a tentacled alien and other life forms.

The first draft was an exercise in style involving a short story inspired by each holiday of the year. Thus we have Christmas, Valentine’s Day, Halloween and Easter.

Feedback is appreciated on whether to translate it into English and whether there is a potential interested reader here.

Have a great day!